Soon ..very soon..

Ouch!!!” she yelled in pain, almost losing her balance. This was the second time in as many minutes that she had stubbed her toe. ย If she kept walking like this, she would need to forget about going home and head to the doctor’s clinic instead.

The road -or what was left of it – was littered with assorted, rough-edged stones, chucks of tar coal and discarded pavers. Forgetting her pain for a minute, she smiled to herself “BMC has dug up everything!! Surely the monsoon is on its way!”

Note: I managed to write this one in 88 words. Better than last time! ๐Ÿ˜€

There are threads of factย in this piece of fiction too. ( I will evnetually move to an all-out fiction..just like I will one day write within 55 words! :P) In case you think I am kidding you, I suggest you visit our city and see the wonderful state of the roads for yourself!

18 thoughts on “Soon ..very soon..

  1. :-))))

    With so many bad things we still love them:-))) thats what I like most abt it:-)))

    u managed to do it in 888 words…

    damn …

    good one dear:-))

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